對聯遊戲(結果公布) - 神魔之塔
By Caitlin
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各位看倌好:
抱歉拖了一段時間才將大家的投稿都看完。
此間確頗有許多佳作,
而在審視各位所用詞彙、典故的過程中,
也讓小弟受益良多。
當然,亦蒙受不少人的指教,
小弟感激不盡,於此略表謝忱。
以下公布小弟評度結果,並簡單說明原因:
上聯:單槍匹馬,拚死逢生,八足難維慧眼。
平 仄 仄 平 仄 平 仄
一、 就平仄而言,
上聯中,「槍」、「馬」、「死」、「生」、「足」、「維」、「眼」七字務必對,
其中「足」標定為仄聲,故需以平聲去對,
而考量到版眾對音韻的了解,亦開放以現代漢語的調值進行創作。
二、就詞性、句式而言,
「單槍匹馬」屬於 形名形名 的結構,
「拚死逢生」屬於 動名動名 的態式,
「八足難維慧眼」則是 形名副動形名 ,
寬對而言,符合以上結構的都算合格。
進一步的話,
(1) 以器物(尤其是武具)對槍、 (2) 以動物對馬、
(3) 以另一組反義辭彙對死生、 (4) 以數量詞對八、
(5) 以肢體部位對足、眼
則是更佳的選擇。
三、 就意境而言,
如起始貼文所述,
上聯第一句形容卡面、第二句針對技能作描述、第三句則說的是奧丁的神話故事,
故能分別以此三項內容去對者為上乘。
就此三個層面來說,小弟不才,評選出的心目中三甲如下:
第一名:guava***4
上聯:單槍匹馬,拚死逢生,八足難維慧眼;
下聯:雙膂單槌,毀天滅地,二能豈抗賢言?
不專業點評:
第二句雖未能以技能去對,然用字古雅,且不出律,可臻上選。
惟「膂」字蓋指脊骨,如
《論衡》:「夫烏、兔、蟾蜍,日月氣也,若人之腹臟、萬物之心膂也。」
《康熙字典》:「呂,古膂字,象人垂骨之形。」
然索爾似無兩條脊椎之說,故可直接作「臂」字。
註:《東觀漢記》「祭肜膂力過人,常貫三百斤弓,入為太僕。」
《釋名》「櫓,膂也,用膂力然後舟行也。」
此可能是作者將膂誤通為臂之所由,然此指脊力亦無不可。
◎ 若有索爾具雙脊骨或膂通臂字的說法,還望不吝告知。
第二名:clou***3
上聯:單槍匹馬,拚死逢生,八足難維慧眼;
下聯:鬱木青紗,格天假地,四宇肯棄香腮?
不專業點評:
意境甚佳,惜宇字出律,
兼之末句除原文中提到的「諷刺眾神在追求時所帶來的爭端和禍患殊無必要」外,
謂之「為美人犧牲奉獻在所不惜」亦無不可,略有不切之病。
第三名:violetph***i
上聯:單槍匹馬,拚死逢生,八足難維慧眼;
下聯:百戰萬夫,冠銅斬鐵,一聲怒動汪洋。
不專業點評:
詞性、音律、意境皆宜,
若能依序以卡面、技能、故事去對,乃更工整。
題外話:
抱歉這次活動拖了這麼長的時間才公布結果,
此間係因小魯個人生涯規劃相關事務以至於開始評閱的時間稍遲。
雖本週一便已初步看完,
但有些小魯也不熟的生字典故,不去圖書館翻一下書實在不太安穩,
故遲至今天才公布,
讓各位版眾久待真是不好意思,還望見諒。
此外,此番評選蓋限於小魯一人之眼力、才賦,
雖力為之,
然未能盡善之處仍所在多有,
不免貽笑方家。
若使您不快,還請一哂棄之即是。
最後,前面提到有關小魯的生涯規劃,也在今天有了好的結果。
就順便藉這篇文發批幣慶祝吧!
以下前十推,每推300P,
此後每10推100P,
第一百推500P。( 發到100推,不重複發放 )
推文批幣跟遊戲獎金將在短期內發出
( 註:短期定義可參考LOL版,最遲一週內放送完畢 )
祝大家遊戲愉快!!!吃五跳五!!!
--
時代像篩子,篩得每一個人流離失所,篩得少數人出類拔萃。
王鼎鈞〈一方陽光〉
--
抱歉拖了一段時間才將大家的投稿都看完。
此間確頗有許多佳作,
而在審視各位所用詞彙、典故的過程中,
也讓小弟受益良多。
當然,亦蒙受不少人的指教,
小弟感激不盡,於此略表謝忱。
以下公布小弟評度結果,並簡單說明原因:
上聯:單槍匹馬,拚死逢生,八足難維慧眼。
平 仄 仄 平 仄 平 仄
一、 就平仄而言,
上聯中,「槍」、「馬」、「死」、「生」、「足」、「維」、「眼」七字務必對,
其中「足」標定為仄聲,故需以平聲去對,
而考量到版眾對音韻的了解,亦開放以現代漢語的調值進行創作。
二、就詞性、句式而言,
「單槍匹馬」屬於 形名形名 的結構,
「拚死逢生」屬於 動名動名 的態式,
「八足難維慧眼」則是 形名副動形名 ,
寬對而言,符合以上結構的都算合格。
進一步的話,
(1) 以器物(尤其是武具)對槍、 (2) 以動物對馬、
(3) 以另一組反義辭彙對死生、 (4) 以數量詞對八、
(5) 以肢體部位對足、眼
則是更佳的選擇。
三、 就意境而言,
如起始貼文所述,
上聯第一句形容卡面、第二句針對技能作描述、第三句則說的是奧丁的神話故事,
故能分別以此三項內容去對者為上乘。
就此三個層面來說,小弟不才,評選出的心目中三甲如下:
第一名:guava***4
上聯:單槍匹馬,拚死逢生,八足難維慧眼;
下聯:雙膂單槌,毀天滅地,二能豈抗賢言?
不專業點評:
第二句雖未能以技能去對,然用字古雅,且不出律,可臻上選。
惟「膂」字蓋指脊骨,如
《論衡》:「夫烏、兔、蟾蜍,日月氣也,若人之腹臟、萬物之心膂也。」
《康熙字典》:「呂,古膂字,象人垂骨之形。」
然索爾似無兩條脊椎之說,故可直接作「臂」字。
註:《東觀漢記》「祭肜膂力過人,常貫三百斤弓,入為太僕。」
《釋名》「櫓,膂也,用膂力然後舟行也。」
此可能是作者將膂誤通為臂之所由,然此指脊力亦無不可。
◎ 若有索爾具雙脊骨或膂通臂字的說法,還望不吝告知。
第二名:clou***3
上聯:單槍匹馬,拚死逢生,八足難維慧眼;
下聯:鬱木青紗,格天假地,四宇肯棄香腮?
不專業點評:
意境甚佳,惜宇字出律,
兼之末句除原文中提到的「諷刺眾神在追求時所帶來的爭端和禍患殊無必要」外,
謂之「為美人犧牲奉獻在所不惜」亦無不可,略有不切之病。
第三名:violetph***i
上聯:單槍匹馬,拚死逢生,八足難維慧眼;
下聯:百戰萬夫,冠銅斬鐵,一聲怒動汪洋。
不專業點評:
詞性、音律、意境皆宜,
若能依序以卡面、技能、故事去對,乃更工整。
題外話:
抱歉這次活動拖了這麼長的時間才公布結果,
此間係因小魯個人生涯規劃相關事務以至於開始評閱的時間稍遲。
雖本週一便已初步看完,
但有些小魯也不熟的生字典故,不去圖書館翻一下書實在不太安穩,
故遲至今天才公布,
讓各位版眾久待真是不好意思,還望見諒。
此外,此番評選蓋限於小魯一人之眼力、才賦,
雖力為之,
然未能盡善之處仍所在多有,
不免貽笑方家。
若使您不快,還請一哂棄之即是。
最後,前面提到有關小魯的生涯規劃,也在今天有了好的結果。
就順便藉這篇文發批幣慶祝吧!
以下前十推,每推300P,
此後每10推100P,
第一百推500P。( 發到100推,不重複發放 )
推文批幣跟遊戲獎金將在短期內發出
( 註:短期定義可參考LOL版,最遲一週內放送完畢 )
祝大家遊戲愉快!!!吃五跳五!!!
--
時代像篩子,篩得每一個人流離失所,篩得少數人出類拔萃。
王鼎鈞〈一方陽光〉
--
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