一個小時的感想,觀望者請進(薄雷) - 仙劍奇俠傳
By Kama
at 2011-07-12T00:47
at 2011-07-12T00:47
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相信對大部分人來說,單機RPG著重的一定是劇情
稍稍懂劇本寫作或是故事編排的人也知道,一部電視劇或是一則廣告
要是無法在開頭吸引觀眾的目光,那後面也不用太費心思了
因為觀眾已經轉台了。
小弟我因為不想踩到雷,這幾天都沒看板上的討論
直到現在才後悔莫及。
我一直相信仙劍不會給我這種恐怖的感覺,什麼感覺呢
平。淡。無。趣。
以下有一點點劇情,其實也不算劇情,就是非常平淡的敘事
觀望者可以繼續往下看,完全不會破壞遊戲樂趣,因為你一定猜的到
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片頭跟歷代仙劍動畫差不多,反正就是看不懂
姜雲凡是山寨少主人,就像許多小說中的年輕人一樣,頭腦簡單四肢發達
唐雨柔是山莊大小姐,就像許多小說中的大小姐一樣,精通琴棋書畫還會療傷
開頭一小時的劇情大概就是這樣:
少主人在山上遇到被潑猴追殺的大小姐,山寨的人救了他一命,大小姐很感激他們
由於大小姐上山是為了採草藥,所以少主人便自告奮勇幫忙
在採草藥的過程中遇到猴老大,少主人英勇的表現打退猴老大贏得正妹的芳心
但是手臂不小心掛了采,大小姐略懂醫術就幫少主人醫好了手(小雪表示:)
唯一的梗就是少主人似乎天生不怕毒,被猴老大抓傷卻沒事(雲天河表示:)
兩人回到山寨後發現山寨中的小女孩突然病危
就當筆者覺得故事終於有轉機的時候,大小姐一下子就治好小女孩
還因為心地善良就順便留下來幫大夥看診
過了不久兩位弟兄上來通報,有人包圍山寨了!而且不是官兵喔!
就當筆者覺得故事應該要有轉機的時候,一看到包圍山寨的老大
果然是莊主來找女兒了
找到之後也沒發生甚麼事,女兒就跟著老爸回家了
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以上就是大概一個鐘頭之內發生的故事
怎麼會如此無趣呢
姚仙阿姚仙,你真的有親自監督嗎?
看看一代的開頭:
客棧的店小二為了救病危的嬸嬸前往傳說中的仙靈島求解藥,遇到迷一般的仙女被逼成
親還跟人家睡了一晚,回來後卻因為被苗人下藥把事情全忘了......
看看四代的開頭:
從小在山裡長大的孤兒遇見闖進自己父母墓室的少女,父親遺留多年的長劍竟然一閃
就把整個墓室給弄垮了,在少女的慫恿和自己的好奇心驅使下,決定下山尋找關於父母
的往事......
你看,隨便兩句話都比五代來的有魅力多了
我現在真的不敢繼續往下寫了,越寫越覺得五代把仙劍的招牌給OOXX...
看得這裡的觀望者,不用懷疑
如果你還沒買,把錢省下來吧!
--
稍稍懂劇本寫作或是故事編排的人也知道,一部電視劇或是一則廣告
要是無法在開頭吸引觀眾的目光,那後面也不用太費心思了
因為觀眾已經轉台了。
小弟我因為不想踩到雷,這幾天都沒看板上的討論
直到現在才後悔莫及。
我一直相信仙劍不會給我這種恐怖的感覺,什麼感覺呢
平。淡。無。趣。
以下有一點點劇情,其實也不算劇情,就是非常平淡的敘事
觀望者可以繼續往下看,完全不會破壞遊戲樂趣,因為你一定猜的到
-------------------------------------------------------------------
片頭跟歷代仙劍動畫差不多,反正就是看不懂
姜雲凡是山寨少主人,就像許多小說中的年輕人一樣,頭腦簡單四肢發達
唐雨柔是山莊大小姐,就像許多小說中的大小姐一樣,精通琴棋書畫還會療傷
開頭一小時的劇情大概就是這樣:
少主人在山上遇到被潑猴追殺的大小姐,山寨的人救了他一命,大小姐很感激他們
由於大小姐上山是為了採草藥,所以少主人便自告奮勇幫忙
在採草藥的過程中遇到猴老大,少主人英勇的表現打退猴老大贏得正妹的芳心
但是手臂不小心掛了采,大小姐略懂醫術就幫少主人醫好了手(小雪表示:)
唯一的梗就是少主人似乎天生不怕毒,被猴老大抓傷卻沒事(雲天河表示:)
兩人回到山寨後發現山寨中的小女孩突然病危
就當筆者覺得故事終於有轉機的時候,大小姐一下子就治好小女孩
還因為心地善良就順便留下來幫大夥看診
過了不久兩位弟兄上來通報,有人包圍山寨了!而且不是官兵喔!
就當筆者覺得故事應該要有轉機的時候,一看到包圍山寨的老大
果然是莊主來找女兒了
找到之後也沒發生甚麼事,女兒就跟著老爸回家了
------------------------------------------------------------------
以上就是大概一個鐘頭之內發生的故事
怎麼會如此無趣呢
姚仙阿姚仙,你真的有親自監督嗎?
看看一代的開頭:
客棧的店小二為了救病危的嬸嬸前往傳說中的仙靈島求解藥,遇到迷一般的仙女被逼成
親還跟人家睡了一晚,回來後卻因為被苗人下藥把事情全忘了......
看看四代的開頭:
從小在山裡長大的孤兒遇見闖進自己父母墓室的少女,父親遺留多年的長劍竟然一閃
就把整個墓室給弄垮了,在少女的慫恿和自己的好奇心驅使下,決定下山尋找關於父母
的往事......
你看,隨便兩句話都比五代來的有魅力多了
我現在真的不敢繼續往下寫了,越寫越覺得五代把仙劍的招牌給OOXX...
看得這裡的觀望者,不用懷疑
如果你還沒買,把錢省下來吧!
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